Home Just In Communities Forums Beta Readers Dictionary Search Login Register Extras
Reviews For: My Imperfect World - Reviews: Page 1 of 6
DOMOxKUN 2009-11-02 . chapter 14
Several things.
One, please update soon ! I know you haven't updated in a while but hopefully you'll read my review and get inspired? (:
Two, I'm surprised you have so little of a response for this story ! I started to read it and couldn't stop. Actually, I was quite disappointed that it was not complete and was INCOMPLETE at chapter 14 ): How depressing.
Three, I'm not trying to be a suck up but I'd definitely like to nominate you for the next skow awards (: I think your story has great potential for the best love triangle category ~

Well.
I have lots of stuff whirling in my head right now but I just feel like I can't write it down fast enough. Just to end on a good note, I really love your story. And hopefully after a polish and shine, you'd be interested in publishing? I'd definitely buy (:
WhoopDeF*ckinDoo 2009-08-08 . chapter 14
I loved it! Great job!
This story is great!

I'm totally in love with Teague!

And I totally want to Jump Levi!

Not to mention Brody and Kale! M Delicious! =]

Can't wait for more! =]
CarBeck4ever 2009-07-29 . chapter 14
I Loved it! Cant wait for the rest!
Bloody Crayon 2009-04-20 . chapter 14
Hey I'm too lazy to log in and I know it's been forever since you updated, but I haven't had any time. Anyway... This is a great chapter. I love the Harley. Yay! Levi is hot, but he is such an asshole. Sorry, I prefer Teague even though it is sort of incestuous, but he is much sweeter and nicer than Levi because he has some decency.

Anyway great chapter! Please update soon.

Bloody Crayon
Super.Secret.Music.Mission. 2009-04-06 . chapter 14
It's better! You used my dash/comma suggestions...*dreamy smile* I'm still recovering from the hospital (I got out a few nights ago), and seeing that just makes me so happy for some reason.

Life is good being a beta. :)

Update soon!! And email me the new chapter fast. I want to see what happens with Levi!
Shinedownfan 2009-04-04 . chapter 14
I LOVE this story! Excellent!
sarah12345 2009-04-03 . chapter 14
amazingg chapterr! :)
i'm just waiting for Aurora to get with Teague,
seriously, i love him :)
although Levi is warming up to me, he's seems okay now :)
again, you're an awesome author.
xx
chubbly4eva 2009-04-03 . chapter 14
Well Done on another amazing chapter, a tad short but worth the wait :)
Gosh Levi sounds so hot but i'm still rooting for Teague.How many chapters do you think this story's going to be?
I can't wait for the next one!

x
welcome to meganland 2009-04-02 . chapter 14
Chapter was kind of ahort but i cant wait for the date in the next one! Try to update son!
welcome to meganland 2009-03-25 . chapter 13
Cant wait for more. Totaly curious.
sirNancelot 2009-02-05 . chapter 13
okay, so I've been sitting in front of my comp for...a good period of time reading this story and i love it. it's really funny and entertaining. Can't wait for the next chapter
chubbly4eva 2009-02-04 . chapter 13
That's a pretty awesome chapter, Well done

The family arguement was funny, i didn't expect Michelle to be such a cow though and jason seems to be quite interesting too. I'm looking forward to more family brawls like this!Btw i'm on team teague, he sounds so cute.

Update soon

xoxo
sarah12345 2009-02-04 . chapter 13
yeyy for family arguments :D
this chapter was very exciting :D
and, aha, i love how Teague and Levi are arguing over Aurora.
this chapter is pretty amazing :D
x
xorosieox 2009-02-04 . chapter 13
Oh how lovely! I love family dinner time brawls! They're always the most entertaining.

This is like some twisted Yours, Mine and Ours stuff. I don't really have a big or mixed family, so I can't even imagine what it would really be like to be in a situation like that, but you give me a pretty funny idea.

Update soon!
Allie92 2009-02-04 . chapter 13
oh the drama ! levi is so sure of himself hmm i wonder if that will change . great update .
Return to Top