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| kloun doll 2008-06-21 ch 1,  | abuseeverbody has days like that, it's a good poem. |
| MagicalThinking 2008-06-15 ch 1, | abusehell yes..-_- trust me, ive been trying to convey these in my recent poems..This is a great piece, its simple and to the point--and yes, I completely stand beside you on this. The feeling of just feeling out of place, ignore, awkward and unwelcome--the feeling of just not being wanted, you want to escape, you want to distance yourself yet then again..if you do, it will only get worse Great job! |