ahh, damn those blue-eyed fiends.

i love the description and the personal touches you added,

it makes it so much more real and somehow more understandable.

that was heartbreaking and sad and everything in between.. please keep writing ;)

hearts to you,

tiara

very well written piece, emotional and real. Good work!

Faith

Fantastic! Wonderfully written.

beautiful

love how you call him blue eyes at the end

and i like the use of parentheses and synonyms :]

overall, wonderful poem