I'm really liking the character interaction here. Got me giggling until the end. XD

Gah, you ended on a cliff hanger! The suspense is already killing me. XD

Seriously, this story is getting good. I like how you execute humor. To me, it's not corny or over the top.

I noticed that during the dialogue, the dialogue usually end with a period. I believe they should end with a comma instead, when there's a dialogue tag after it [ex: "I don't care," the pirate said scornfully.] - except when it ends with an ellipsis, question mark, or exclamation mark. This is something that I somehow forgot to mention in my latest review for VIRUS, but I'm not seeing a lot of tags during the dialogue in this chapter, which is good. :-)

I'm on a large reviewing spree today. I've been wanting to read this and I'm glad that I finally got around to it. This chapter was awesome and it had a lot going on in it. Once I started reading, I couldn't stop.

Great chapter! OMG I LMAO srsly!

Moegi made me laugh in this chapter, probably more then Abumi and Ruri. It's really hard to discern who's the funniest of them. Oh and I wonder what will happen now that Ikkouku finally found them. I can't wait until your next update!

Rofl, Abumi and Ruri never cease to amaze me. I love how funny they are and adding Moegi into the mix was just genius. I wonder what will happen now that Ikkouku has come back? This will be most interesting.

I wonder if they'll be facing off against Ikkouku, now that she's shown up. I want to see Ninja Fish Zatani pull off some ninjutsu. He probably can't but that would be funny if he could.

This is wonderful. I really liked the part where Moegi slid into Abumi and Ruri. That was hilarious!

Everyone was hilarious in this chapter! I couldn't stop laughing at Moegi, Abumi and Ruri. They all manage to bring a smile to my face. This story is definitely a feel good piece. I love it so much.

This chapter was really funny and it had more physical humor then anything, though I really did like the humor between Ruri and Abumi. They really crack me up.

This is humorous. You're very good at creating fun, memorable characters. To me, they're definitely the type to be in an anime/manga. My favorite is Ruri because she's crazy. XD

I really like how the plot is random, and how you manage to make everything in the story work.

I can understand that you first wrote this story years ago, so I don't have a lot of constructive criticism to provide. It'll just be a repetition of my review of VIRUS.

For lack of a better review- Great chapter! It was unique and I really like where this idea is going. I can't wait to see Ikkouku in action!

Zatani (fish or not) and Ikkouku are quickly becoming my favorite couple, aside from Abumi and Moegi. I'm interested to see more of where this story is going.

Zatani kicked ass! Too bad he was turned into a fish, and boy are Abumi and Moegi going to get it when Ikkouku finds them! I totally want to know what's going to happen next! INFORM ME!

I'm suprised that I have an update here and a wonderful one at that. I really love this story and despite it being old, it's turning out to be one of my personal favorites, aside from VIRUS. Enjoyable read. I look forward to your next installment.

This was a really good chapter! I like the turned into a fish idea! Very original.