No! Zeshen died! But in the past he willingly sacrified his memories to save Kohanna from death! How noble and magnanimous of him! I love this story so much! I like it a lot! It's so sad it had to end this way...poor Zeshen...poor Kohanna.

So Eien's been killing people and using them as test subjects with his mechanical warfare!? How terrible of him! I hope Kohanna and Zeshen don't die! Kohanna's too serene and munificent to die!

So Eien wants to infuse Kohanna's soul into Haruhi (Haruhi Suzumiya?) to cure her of her terminal illness? I understand he's trying to save her, but he doesn't have to steal Kohanna's soul! I have a feeling I'm going to hate him so much. But this is great! I like it a lot!

I'm glad Zeshen's got eyesight. Kohanna seems like such a sweet, gentle and cute girl. But I'm angry at that man who's imprisoning her! I hope he dies! This is great! I love it!

Wow! This is actually really good! I like the bolded poem-like words connect the story together and describe where the bird/angel is.

*cries like a baby* That was so sad! You love someone and then they die. That sucks! Such a tragic story...YOU'RE AWESOME! I bet you wish all of your stories were done like this. I know you do...Don't cha? Okay Bye Bye!

EVIL CAGES OF DEATH!

Hello. Wow, what a tangled web this is. A very weird situation to be in. I don't know what Id do. I hope they all can figure it out.

He can see! That must be some relief! If I were Suzuka I would be hella confused to find someone laying on the ground in the rain. I'd be all scared. Onto the next one!

I wow, I haven't heard from Suzuka since TPA I miss her! I wish him all the luck on his journey! Good luck!

I'd be confused too if I woke up and heard someone singing and I didn't know where it was coming from. I'd check myself into the insane asylum. This sounds like an interesting story. I'll review the next chapter...or first chapter techincally.

This was a wonderful end. Also very sad. Overall this is one of the best works I've read. The plot was greatly constructed with all the twist and turns. Loved how you wrote the end. Really this will always be one of my favorite tales!Wonderful job!!

A great conclusion and clearing up the past between them. It was a hard-hitting ending and it definitely made this story a classic! Well, this is where I part...and go to catch up on Sacrifice! See you!

I like the references to old wive's tales regarding birds and bad luck. I also love the technology-based aspects of this story. Making the cage come to life was brilliant and it explained a large part of why Kohanna couldn't escape. A wonderful chapter with great action and nice, well-rounded characters.

Poor Suzuka. I feel really sorry for her, probably more then anyone else. Zeshen is so hard-set on rescuing Kohanna and Eien so desperately wants to keep Haruhi alive. Everyone is probably going to learn that you can't stop fate and time. In that aspect, it is reminiscent of Sacrifice in many ways.