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| Shasta Valentine 2008-08-13 ch 1,  | abuseLet love be the ties that bind us, Let love be the movement that guides us, Let us write in on our arms, Write it on our hearts, On the canvas of our minds, Let love be the tie that binds. i just love it so much i want to make a t-shirt out of it. i loved your poem, it was so strong and embodied the organization so well. i only wish you hadn't sporatically rhymed at times (unless it was unconsciously done). but great execution. i could feel your heart in this. -sv |
| lifesjustbegun 2008-06-16 ch 1, | abuseTomorrow's Memories, nice job with this, i love the message. it's very true. ~liz |