|Reviews for Why?|
| jess.rose 3/5/11 . chapter 1
love this it is like i feel.
| softersin 7/17/08 . chapter 1
Wow, it's like you know exactly how I feel at this very moment.
I love it!
Good job :)
| brokencrystal7 6/23/08 . chapter 1
"you can love someone, with no love in return"
those two lines really made me think of my life. it's heartbreaking. :(
| MagicalThinking 6/16/08 . chapter 1
good god.._ I definitely understand this poem; I have gone through this misery and I know it can be a terrible pain..o_O its weird, because usually its like one you've never felt-you find yourself asking "Wow..o_O and no internal bleeding?" its just an odd sensation of agony that you had no idea you had in you (super confusing but I think you get it)
anyway, this poem again is wonderful simply because one can identify with it; its not so in-depth about the story behind it to where people are led off track, its just direct so people can configure it to their own lives
wonderfully written! _ i love this one, its amazing! Keep it up!
| simpleplan13 6/15/08 . chapter 1
You rhyme sometimes, but not in a scheme at all. I might work on that.
I do like the idea of the piece because it is interesting and most people can relate to at least some of it. I also like the ending, it fits perfectly.
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| kloun mannequin 6/15/08 . chapter 1
the rhyme from the starting is cool.