Not bad at all. In fact I liked it alot. I do wish it had a tad more detail. But I figure that was wonderful! (English sucks badly so sorry for Grammar errors)

Chen Cheng-

Bittersweet in a way. Azia was taken but at least he was happy that she said 'hello' to him. But I also may have an idea as to how Azia feels. Having a boy that she isn't the least bit interested in go head over heels for her. Can't exactly blame her but I feel sorry for Landon at the same time. C'est la vie.

I LOVE this! Great job.You should check out my story.

/s/2544189/1/The_Footsteps_Of_A_Stranger

TOO SHORT, BUT SWEET. WISH THERE WAS MORE. PLEASE WTITE ANOTHER ALMOST LIKE IT, BECAUSE I LOVE YOUR STORIES.

LOVED it. :)
i just want to grab landon and cuddle him.
great job -
~stranger

Aw. :(
Poor Landon.

Oh this is really heartbreaking. Good job.