LOL, tu fizeste o mesmo que eu com a Keyra Thomas XD
Não está assim tão mau,mas sim, podia estar melhor. E afinal não houve lemon XD
Realmente só agora me apercebi do quão efiminado é o Blaze, lol, e adoro a relação dele com a Katheryn, tenho a impressão de que quando estão juntos são as verdadeiras **.

"Escreve-nos! Escreve-nos!" - gritavam desesperadamente Blaze e Cameron.

I liked this :) I'm really glad he decided to wait. Good boy. Hahah. And hey, everyone makes little mistakes, you're really good for someone whose first language isn't English. Great job on that! If you ever need help, or need a beta, I'm always available :) Keep it up and update soon!
Faith

Hey! Don't blame me! They aren't in love yet, they have to fall in love and THEN make that.
Ah,o Cameron afinal tb esta interessado em ter mais do que sexo, deu a impressao que não, no cap anterior.
Blaze, eu compreendo esse desespero de falta de exercicio... So cute^^

I like that they're both so flirty! haha. Just remember to slow things down, so we don't get too much of the story too fast. Oh, some tiny mistakes, Kathelin- Katheryn, right? I just caught that. Uhh... "Cameron said fast, patting my tight." -I'm sure you meant thigh. "Cameron asked before stealing me a kiss." That's a bit awkward, I would get rid of the me.
Other than that, I liked it :) Keep it up and it's no problem (for reviewing) :)
Faith

Como assim, não vai andar suficientemente rápido! Ah, o Cameron já quer sexo, mas ainda nem tiveram tempo de se apaixonar! Nao que eu me queixe porque assim é já no próximo capitulo eheh, mas aide ti se é sem amor! Eu sou dessas, sabes bem =P
AHAHAHAH Adonis!? Cameron Adonis? Love it.

Wow, that was fast XD
Pensei que o Cameron ia ser o uke, parece que afinal não... Lol, o Blaze é de objectivos fixos, hein? E adorei a Katheryn, a serio. LOL.ele tem mesmo medo de cavalos? E eu a pensar que tinha sido uma desculpa XD
Quero o resto =P

This has potential. I reccommend proof-reading your work, just to get those nasty little errors out, like se, not see. Things like that. Oh, and the title should probably be Breathe on me, not Breath on me. Same as when he says, you can breath on me all you want should be breathe. Anyways, keep it up and update soon!
Faith
And remember, you don't have to rush things, take your time.