Wow. That was written beautifully. I felt so bad for the knight. He was such a realistic character, which made it easy for me to sympathize with him.

You have very good diction and syntax, which shows you obviously know how to write. Good job. I really enjoyed this. :]

• Jessie my l o v e
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Awesome! The imagery is the too good. And the language is perfect too. Just awesome!

don't know what to say

This was sweet and heartbreaking at the same time. It made me feel sorry for the knight. I would have liked to see the character interacting through dialog and in a given situation. That would have added to the tension. Nice narrative though.

This one's just brilliant... more like poetry than a story. I can't find anything constructive to say about it myself. *sob* I like that knight... this should be a longer story, seperately... it's one of the charries that it's easy to become a big fan of.

This was short, but sweetly so, and the imagery was done quite well. I applaud you on a piece well-written.

Well written piece. It was sad, but the description was fantastic. Nice work. *adds to C2*

Thanks for your review of "Places I Thought I Would Never Go". I really appreciate it.

~Twilight Starr~

That's so incredibly sad. Very well written, though. I like how you leave things open-ended, like the prince and, actually, the princess. Cool!

Oh!
So sweet, but so sad. I absolutely loved it; it was beautiful. It definitely brightened up my day!
Bravo!!
~Jenni