I really like this. I read it twice to make sure I understood it right. It's something that is so true, to others and myself. I like this. Keep it up!

I like the opening - a lot. I wish you didn't give it away in the opening, because it's so much more powerful in here with the formatting. The end of the poem seems to overexplain a bit. I prefer the beginning, where it leaves enough unsead that the reader can interpret.