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writing.life.2.4 2008-06-16 . chapter 1
its interesting.
i like it.
i think it said oneshot but i would definetly like to read more

just one question
the person telling the rape story, was that teegan?
it got a little confusing around there.
you kept saying She but never what she was who.
idk.
mayb it made sense to others and i was just having a blonde moment.

besides that great job.
would luv to read more.
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