This is so ** sexy, I think I just came.

It seems to me that Alice just keeps coming up with even more amazing and thrilling story ideas. I saw this chapter a long time ago, and always ment to read it, but never had the time nor patience to throughly do so. I'm so depressed with myself for ignoring my love for fantasy stories for so long - this was, by far, one of the best fictional writings I've ever read! It should be made into a book, no doubt about that. The detail and characters are extraordinary, showing themselves in the bold light of a creative outline. I adored every part of it, and even if it seemed confusing at one point or another, I still knew somehow what was going on, and cherised every new scene. The possible secrets, the delicious evil, the fasinating lines and smooth detail all pull you in and never let you go. I really hope that this story will continue in the future.