|Reviews for the ballet of the raindrops|
| Iccle Fairy 7/2/08 . chapter 1
great. i don't know if you've seen the visual music..i'm not sure what it's called, but balls hitting pipes and things..made me think of this...sorry not making sense...I enjoyed it :)
| shadow-of-a-trackless-sea 6/17/08 . chapter 1
I liked someof it but I just don't think that the last line really ends it well or works, you might want to add a little more or something.
| kloun mannequin 6/16/08 . chapter 1
aw, I love the imagery is kinda fun and sweet.