I can kind of get why u did this chapter short is it because you wanted ana to tell us about how she got turned into a vampire. We'll I think it's good how u did that, please write the next chapter.

I like were this story is going but can i just ask do all stories always have to be about vampires hating werewolves lol. Nah but it is good i like it.

This is a really good story so far! Very intersesting story line, I would definatley like to see what happens!

Haha. If it involves vampires and werewolves, I SERIOUSLY doubt it's "epic". Epically lame, maybel. Put down the vampire and werewolf romance novels and read some real books, please. Stephenie Meyer is not a guideline for good writing.