FictionPress.com - let the words flow
| FictionPress.com - let the words flow |
|
| Home Just In Communities Forums Beta Readers Dictionary Search | Login Register Extras |
| Averybarbarian 2008-07-18 ch 1,  | abuse'Tis truly lovely! Wondering about the mystery of another accomplishing all but failing to understand. I really liked the lines "I can touch the sky/But I long to touch you" There is a great accomplishment but yet a desire that has not yet been reached. I think this poem is lovely! 'Twas not bad at all =) keep writing! |
| MagicalThinking 2008-06-16 ch 1, | abuseThis is lovely; a wonderful piece! ^_^ It's clear and very vivid; also, this poem is easy to configure to one's own experience. Very good! Keep up the awesome writing! |