I like this poem, but i didnt understand the rhyming scheme, why choose to only rhyme in the middle? though, this does put more emphasis on the last lines.

Keep up the good work!

~painted

The sorrows of those who feel that they must cut to find a solas within their life... It is sad that there are those who have lost all hope and have been driven to the embrace of knives. Have you ever heard of the song "Cut" By Plumb?? It is a great song and I think you would like it. Good poem keep writting! =)