aw. cute. but ... i see very little plot. =D? intended? but lovely, all the same.

I found some weird mistakes ("muct" instead of "must," for one), and this got confusing at points, but generally this was a pretty decent oneshot. I like the unconventionalness of this, and I'm glad Queen of Absolutely Everything added this to our c2. (:

Hey, that was awesome! It's been a while since I read a story with a truly kick-arse female protagonist. I like Sonya, she sounds like a crazy bitch who just happens to be a brilliant character. I wish there were more females in fiction like that, actually. They're all so... perfect and sappy.

And, well, I liked the Australian setting. Just for that "Hey, I did the HSC too! Cool!" feeling.

You said this was a written for fun. It was great fun to read too, I'll tell you, so mission accomplished!

I like it! :) will read some of your other stories... am just about to...

:) i like gals kicking butt!!

LOL
very cuute and funny
loved it
well done!
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