Aw...

This story is really sweet, but I got a bit deterred by some misspelled words. Just a bit of info, but you only use it's when you wish to shorten it and is, and not to show possesiveness. :)Excellent work.

Good luck on future writings!

I loved it.
Short and sweet.

thats beautiful! ^ ^ You should write a whole bunch of short stories like that and turn it into a book. :D

Wow, pretty profound for such few words.

short and sweet.
but nevertheless, beautiful.

So short yet such a brilliant concept, full of emotion and melody. :)

Really compelling.
Sweet and Short, but it holds so many different ideas.
=]

So simple and beautiful. It gives you such a light feeling. Brilliant!