| Reviews for Scrutiny |
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M3L0 1/5/09 . chapter 1 COÑO! meng when's da next chapter coming? |
digna's boobs 8/26/08 . chapter 1 it was very descriptive..*startes into your eyes* |
ManicRocKAddict 7/29/08 . chapter 1 SEXY![readable p...o...-...n... in other words] lol & EVERYTHING CRAZY GOOD! HAHA! |
melo 7/3/08 . chapter 1 i only read the 1st chapter but its steamy and HOT! cant wait to read more... u already had me as a fan after the first moan..lol |
THAT GUY 6/22/08 . chapter 1 This was very good, i liked the way it describes every movevemnt, even the little things,and i like the moans in between( not in a bad way) i can't wait for the next chapter |