|Reviews for Blur Between The Lines|
| From The Stone Bridge 10/8/08 . chapter 1
| From The Stone Bridge 9/6/08 . chapter 1
I am in awe.
| na-na-nadia 6/18/08 . chapter 1
Wow, you are a really good writer. I love the third section the most, and the ending lines are some of the best I've ever read.
| McKinley Cooper 6/17/08 . chapter 1
I don't know what to say. The ground, the stars, and the moon references are unbelievabley unexpected and far above what I could imagine.
I use parentheses a lot, so I always love that.
| Faith Adeline 6/17/08 . chapter 1
I liked it. Good piece.
| East-0f-Eden 6/17/08 . chapter 1
I think the 2nd stanza is the best. What's a empyrean?
| Scarlett Wynter 6/17/08 . chapter 1
I love "i." & "ii." you paint such awesome scenes with your words.
I think that the "(worthless)" at the end of iv. is unnecessary because it's already understood from the word "starless" ...at least I think so.