Heyy. I honestly would like you to finish this story. Wether it's in one chapter or 5 or 10 or whatever. I just want to know what happens ): And i hope you do it bc i noticed you hadent updated it a while . But if you asked me i would say finish this sucker :)

uh oh... maybe it's his cousin?? hopefully =]

i never understand the whole ''talking with the eye thing'' i cant do it

OMG! I love it! I hope Lindsey ends up with Dietrich! Add more soon!

this chapter was so good! I can't wait to see what happens next! I really want her and Garret to get together soon and Angel and Dietrich of course too! please update soon!!

Great chapter!

This is really great. I can't wait for more.

i love this story! please keep writing! i'm dying to know what happens!

Please continue!

I love Lindsey, she's so cute and fun!!

millie xx

The story looks interesting so far.

A friendly piece of advice: If I wanted to have one of my novels published, I wouldn't post it at FictionPress.

Why? Because many publishers want first publication rights. Submitting your story to a private critique group might be a better idea.

Best wishes,

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