Reviews for never should have loved

rust phoenix 2008-07-04 ch 1,	abuseVery real and emotional. I can really connect with this. Your style suits the poem and the honesty comes through. "i let you go/ and you went places you'll never let me see." It's a simple way of putting things that somehow says so much more than it would have if you'd spent too much time expanding the thought and making it more complicated. I love the third stanza especially.
smile for the sunshine 2008-06-20 ch 1,	abusethat was amazing, jess. i absolutely loved this. lovely poem, darling.
no.peace.los.angeles 2008-06-19 ch 1,	abuseI like the idea of someone being someone else's breath, and also the silver lining line. Hmm. Relatable. Keep writing! :)
kloun doll 2008-06-17 ch 1,	abuseit's a great poem, everybody who has got a breakup could relate to this.