I love any story that you write. You have such a talent. Keep up the awesome work!

hm fictionpress just stopped sending me messages for like a month:O good chapter

I actually decided to read this because i like youre other storie:P You really like fairytales:O I like this storie its good.

This story is so good! Keep updating please!

I loved it. I'm dead curious to continue and if you don't, I'm quite tempted to nag you incessantly about it for the rest of the story.

The detail is just fine and I think you describe things pretty well. Of course, I'm no professional so I could be wrong but I still think you're fantastic. Please write some more! I can't wait for the rest!

I love this story so far. It's really interesting and original and something new. I absolutely ADORE it.

Interesting story...I like Prince Aerid actually. He seems...cute. I love how Cassandra's all fiery and mouths off sometimes. They make a good pair...


I wonder how she'll get rid of the curse.


~Kat

Great chapter. And the descriptions were great too. Your 3rd POV is something I wish I could do. I'm a bit bad at that. oh well. But I love this, so update soon!

i get emails from fictionpress just fine :)

hey, i'm not confused anymore since the last review i gave you!

i think i'm beginning to feel myself immersing in this story, i like it

and i wholy enjoy the vast descriptions you put in, not too much but not too little either

although, there was one part where i felt the story sort of jumped - which was the part where at one moment she was sitting on grass, and the next she was sitting on snow in her dreams. i had to read that twice to understand what was going on, so perhaps you can give a better intermediate, or add something more to notify the change clearly

other than that, update!! hehe

I love your story!! Update soon! ^_^

proof is not necessary when one has an army. – Like this, James seems to have a lot of common sense, he also seems very observant. Seeing things through his eyes seemed to give a good idea of what was going on.

‘she was a Young Lady, they no longer allowed it. She was stuck in limbo between royalty and peasantry, and there was no moving up or down.’ And ‘stuck in her inability to accomplish anything greater than merely existing’ – Loved these lines – it seemed to sum up completely Cassandra’s position and how she feels about it. I felt much closer to Cassandra in this chapter actually.

I don’t think there was too much description. It didn’t find that it interrupted the flow of the story anyway, and I did like the bit where Cassandra’s eyes meet Prince Aerid’s in the corridor. You made it feel significant, but not overly so.

NOW THAT'S WHAT I CALL DRAMA. :D It's like Now That's What I Call Music except drama. Because...um. Yeah.

you already know how i feel about this. Simply faboo.
You've got to give me the name of your beta. She's simply fabulous. Funny. Articulate. She's almost as good as you. I hear she's so modest, too.

Ah, perhaps the true love interest? Mwhaha. If not, oh well, maybe I'm just an idiot. But it seems highly probable to me that he is. I guess he will do ;) (kidding, don't get offended, haha).
Great chapter! :)

i'm starting to piece this together. with all the information.
update when possible.

Hello agian!

This story is simply amazing. It is beutifully written and has a fantastic plot. I hope you write more very soon.

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