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mypi 2008-07-17 . chapter 1
heh you know i luv yr writing
but hey it's been sucha long time since i've read anything so... sad
i tend to like sad stuff so treat is as compiment ^^
*hugs*
have to read the latest "voice box" chaps, when i'll find some time
James Hiwatari 2008-06-25 . chapter 1
O_O

I hate it when I'm forced to say that some angst stuff was nice. It doesn't seems right, does it?

Well... anyway, you seem to do that a lot to me. I wasn't suppose to like angst and people dying and... but I did.
It is not... nice... like in...nice... but nice in... some other way... but nice...

Make sense of that paragraph and earn a prize! \o\o\o\

You know... you could make an epilogue for that stuff. It would probably ruin the whole thing about the guy dying and that "mysterious" atmosphere of us knowing nothing about the characters apart fromwhat they did to "deserve" dying, but it would be interesting to see if they did meet in an afterlife.

Hell, I've learned to like angst. Well, people always learn new things, so...

James
efphrim 2008-06-18 . chapter 1
Wow. That could so easily be an amazing story. But I like what you've done with it anyway.
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