I really like this story so far. I hope you update soon!

nice story I read only the first chapter because um I have to go , but this is my review for you

I think your good , just you have to like say how they sound at first when there talking but your details are s good ... your a good author um hey um are you going to write more to it soon ... I just want to know I'll read more to chapter two tomorrow ... and I hope you update soon to

and hey is it ok if you can check out my story sunset , its a vampire love story and I have some poems of it to ...