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| cherubicka 2008-07-18 ch 1,  | abuseI don't even know you, but I know that you must have at least a semblance of wisdom to portray such truth in single sentences. instant favorite. |
| Rose-Divine 2008-06-30 ch 1, | abuse... How... sad; the emotions that run throughout this are so clear. It's lovely how much you've fit into some of the these sentences, and I like how it flows together. Very nice! |
| Chasmodai Blue 2008-06-18 ch 1, | abuseYou capture emotion and character very well; your unnamed protagonist is incredibly interesting. You're a brilliant writer. 1sentence can be kind of hard, but you do it very well. |
| xEmoMuffinx 2008-06-18 ch 1, | abuseHeyy S.o.C!, as I've told you before, I have critiqued it, and you can now view it at where I attached it. :D |