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Anonymous 2008-11-14 . chapter 1
Unique approach which effectively expresses emotion. Language is appropriate and very meaningful. A worthwhile read.
T.W. Stealer 2008-10-29 . chapter 1
This is the kind of piece that I imagine being read at a spoken word event or poetry slam - you'd get silence after reading #30, but only because the emotional power of the narrative hits the audience then.

It all fits. I like how the one-word prompts progress through the alphabet, and I like how the structure parallels the stages of her grief in the same way.

Well done.
Cream Kisses 2008-10-13 . chapter 1
This one is so good I cannot describe it with words.

And I'm pretty eloquent.

At...times. xD

But it's all woven together very skillfully and smoothly; I like how you connected all the prompts to create a short piece of prose.

Awesome job. As usual! (:
cherubicka 2008-07-18 . chapter 1
I don't even know you, but I know that you must have at least a semblance of wisdom to portray such truth in single sentences.
instant favorite.
Rose-Divine 2008-06-30 . chapter 1
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How... sad; the emotions that run throughout this are so clear. It's lovely how much you've fit into some of the these sentences, and I like how it flows together.
Very nice!
Chasmodai Blue 2008-06-18 . chapter 1
You capture emotion and character very well; your unnamed protagonist is incredibly interesting. You're a brilliant writer.

1sentence can be kind of hard, but you do it very well.
xEmoMuffinx 2008-06-18 . chapter 1
Heyy S.o.C!, as I've told you before, I have critiqued it, and you can now view it at where I attached it. :D
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