an unhappy relationship is far from an original concept, but you make up for that by writing the topic with excellent style. the word choice is wonderful, as are your metaphors, and these elements evoke a very tangible atmosphere. well done, really great work.

Wow, I really love this.

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Pretty speechless, too, haha.

Your emotions are brought across clear and sharp. The metaphors used are brilliant, and elegant. The word choice is excellent, especially 'never always' line. You paint some beautiful images with this piece. Also, I must say that you ended it with a bang. Impactful, and straight to the point. Well done. I really have no criticism to offer.

I like the ending about washing the sheets.