I thought that this chapter was rather funny, but it may cover a bit to much time for it's word count, which can make it confusing and seem rushed. I did like the title a lot more though, I mean, at first I thought you meant like "dirty" but, no, it was a clever way to say it without giving anything away!
Write on!
Pen.Dragon

I really like this chapter! But the title at the top kinda ruined it, I mean, there wasn't any surprise. Also, I really like your idea of taking both the characters POV's, that's just cool. I'm so gonna read on!
Write on!
Pen.Dragon

Gostei da cena entre o will e nile (ja agora, adorei o nome "nile", axo k o vou roubar para alguma persoangem minha XD)

very funny and unique. horray for falling books. i liked the part where she was looking for distress.

Hmm. Interesting. But funny.

Pois, eu faço o mesmo =P (refiro-me a tua nota final).
OMG,rapariga sem escrupulos, destruiu a familia! Bem, ao menos não matou a mãe, estava a ficar horrorizada com ideia, já percebo pk esta a historia classificada como K+ XD.
Ela é um bocadinho estupida, eu NAO dava o dinherio por uma poção que NAO queria, mas pronto, acabou por dar certo.
Bjs^^

Menos engraçado, mas não esta mau. Um principe dislexico? LOL

LOL bom começo. Quando o livro lhe caiu na cabeça não consegui deixar de a associar à "descobridora" da gravidade no mundo dos contos de fadas.

I liked the conversational telling of the story.
I read your bio. My friends and I collaborate from time to time as well.