very pretty.
I was kind of expecting this one to have a sad or unhappy ending, but even if this were considered in line with the James marrying another girl / Faye getting over him storyline, this ending is still very fitting for this piece.
this one's just as good as Black Coffee, but I think I might like this one better.
very excellent.

I'd love to have a moment like that! Well done!

Wow that was really, really, really good!

I like this :) It's got a nice, poetic flow to it, with a lot of lovely metaphors and beautiful imagery. I particularly like their interaction - it seems so natural and real.

That was really cute! I loved it. I think it's really awesome how you were able to get them together without them kissing. you did a great job.

oh SO cute!

god thats such a pretty ending middle and beggining,
goodness i just ahh love them , and its not obvious but its so obvious at the same time! loved ti!

I loved it! It was a sweet story.
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