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fullmetal-chinchilla 2008-06-26 . chapter 1
What? A love poem from you? My my, the world's going to end now. That'd be like me drawing some lovers or something XD...

As weird and unexpected as this is...ich liebe dich. Velmi prosim. See? It's so good I wrote praise in two languages!
View from the Windowsill 2008-06-23 . chapter 1
LOL... I'm on the phone with you right now...
Bravo! Very well written... You normally DON'T write romance-y poetry(or poetry at all) but still very good.
P-k
TheBeautyOfTheGrave 2008-06-23 . chapter 1
Wow, you said my work was incredible (thanks btw but it's really REALLY not!) but this is great. So real...so horrifically real!

Many lines I love but this one in particular - Useless, worn-out clichés! - is just so amazing and truthful. You have a very poetic style, which is good as you are writing a poem! xD

Very incredible poem, don't ever stop writing hun, you're good! xD

Holli xx
Guilty Angel 2008-06-18 . chapter 1
This poem reminds me of my situation so much. Great job and keep up the good work.
ShockingReality 2008-06-18 . chapter 1
So many people could probably relate to this, I know I can. I like your style and rhythm, you have a knack for poetry
kloun mannequin 2008-06-18 . chapter 1
love is like that, you always fall for who you don't imagine.

good poem.
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