Amazing! Great work.

Wow, it really feels like your writing comes from expirences rather than thought up things, I generaly write after thinking quite a bit, like letting something build up and break the dam, but then there are chunks of debris and mud flowing in the water that is literature. It seems like you simply write everytime it rains. Love the theme once more.

Hey, it's been a while. While I'm not too sure what this is about, I think your flair with weaving words into poetry complements the personal significance of this poem very well. Keep it up!