Oh I like it, hehehehehe. Cant wait to see what her reaction to that will be.
JM

Hmm, this don't sound to bad. I do wonder what or 'who' Gabe is? Hopefully the next chapter will tell me.

I like the prologue. It gave me a feel of Gabe's personality.

I like the way you puts things in this story. It keeps me interested in the story.

So I hope you update as soon as your able to. And good work.

x Snow

This story is really interesting, I'll be looking forward to seeing what happens.
Also I love the line, "I'm the Devil and I'm taking you to Hell with me."
Can't wait for more!
DodbC

I like Leah's pov better... anyway, interesting chapter. Update soon.

Haven't a clue where this is going, but I like your stuff usually so I thought I'd give it a read. Interesting start. Hope to read more.

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Katie
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Oh this is a cool idea I like it, please update soon.
JM