Hey,

LOVE where this story is going so far. I love the whole leader bad guy story lines. I love all of the characters you have introduced so far. The female main character is very believeble and even though he's supposed to be bad i already like the Kyle character.

Can't wait for the next update

I Think That This Stories Really Really God!
Its Really Interesting & Has Potential...

Um The Plot Could Be Improved A Bit Because I Don't Get The Whole Entire Plot Eg. Summary Because All I Know About The Story Is That The Goverment Has Been Over Thrown & This Gang Called The Empire Has Taken Over Baltimore & ANd 16 Other States. & Yea THats ABt It

I Really Hope That This Was Helpful...?!