I can't wait for Heath to find out!

I find this story vastly entertaining. :D

such a great chapter! I can't wait to find out if the boys finally discover that she's a girl! keep up the awesome writing and post the next chapter soon!

nice. it wasn't very surprising the way the guys reacted to her! so hilarious...

haha, i loved it so much. my favorite character in here has to be Rex. he is so funny sometimes :]

haha, i loved it and i'm excited that her brother has come into the story! awesome chapter. you write very well!

how could she be so stupid about just wearing a WHITE t-shirt? especially with a BLACK bra! i guess she didn't expect company. great chapter!

awesome chapter, as usual. and i love the fact that u put pics of the characters on your livejournal. heath is pretty cute and alex is very pretty indeed. i'm surprised the guys didn't fall for her even though they thought she was a guy! lol xD

whoo hoo! GREAT chapter! i loved the last line Alex said :]

oh man, im surprised Alex actually kissed her on the forehead. to make it seem more believeable that she's not a girl or to keep the guys from thinking 'he's' gay, perhaps?

i absolutely adore this story. i really do. i hope u update soon on this because this story is my favorite out of the one's i've read so far.

haha, i loved it. Rex was pretty mad that Alex has better grace skills when it comes to 'his ladies.'

haha, great work!

wow, i just love this story so far! it is absolutely amazing. i can't wait to read the rest of it to see how it turns out!

You HAVE to continue!

THis story is so good!

millie xx

I didn't particularly like this chapter. I love this story cos of its non-cliche style. This chapter was too clichéd for my liking. I hope you can get back to your amazing story soon.