Beautiful. It made sense - really, it was odd just how much it did.

It makes perfect sense.

I think, maybe it does make sense, in a surreal, metaphorical, between-the-lines way... But in any case, I think it's wonderful. All the dialogue seems so real, like they're thoughts everyone has had.

->peace, death and taxes,
spiral

Although--no--it doesn't make much sense, it's still quite captivating. That might be due to the imagery, but it could also be because of the painstaking reality of the conversation being made. Regardless, this is beautiful.

sometimes things have to make not that much sense in order to mean anything... the words are -perfect- i can't imagine it any better..

Well I don't know but I like it. I really do. I honestly wish I'd wrote it.

Cheers

westnedge

But it's good.
Really good. So what if it doesn't make sense? Life doesn't make sense. Why should everything else be any different?
I say, be weird and be proud of it!

Kayleigh