i like it. it's short, but yet tells a whole story. nice

I like the simplistic way that you express an entire idea in so few words because it allows each word its own power. I also like the general way the poem flows because it makes the end sound end-like. (Does that thing I just said even make sense? I don't know.)

Aww.. I hate it when people do things like that. Even if it was an accident it still hurts if you don't know it at the time..

accidents happen. sometimes, you just have to cool off and look it over again later. I like the "whatever" feeling. Keep writing!

This was confusing to me at first, but then it clicked. Love it, as always, but uh...I thought you loved you're best friend, or did you finally let go?

this has got a "yeah, whatever" tone to it, haha

it's' like you're saying "you had your chance, but oh well"

idk, i just kinda like it lol

i especially like the shortness of it, makes it better that way ]

That's sort of disappointing I'd think.

Good job.