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| FunkyFlower16 2008-07-04 ch 1,  | abusewow! This completely took me back to this novel I read by Stephen King. I can't remember what it was called, but 'red rum' and 'murder' was so repetitive in that book too. God, it really spooks you though. The repetition builds up a kind of constant drum roll rhythm in the background. Great work, I love this ;) ~mez~ |