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| AvidReader 2008-08-24 ch 6, anon. | abusenice chapter. very entertaining. its funny to imagine someone having three over protecting brothers trying to control their life and beat the face in of their potential boyfriend. Adam gives me a creepy, crazy, stalker, obsessive guy. he just seems to interested and eager to help. i would be kind of freaked out by him. but who knows maybe he is just being friendly. the beginning was particularly entertaining. hope you update soon. |
| dreamgazer220 2008-08-22 ch 6,  | abuseNow I have "Breakfast at Tiffany's" stuck in my head. Thank you. =) Aww, this was cute! I love Adam. He's so adorable. And Gabe, Jake, and Ben are ridiculous... and things are definitely going to be interesting with Brian now that he's in the picture, and she's going to be up at Penn State a lot... Huh. I have a few ideas, but I can't say them here. So whenever you're online, I'll talk to you =) Adam's adorable♥ |
| Alexandra:D:D 2008-08-21 ch 5, anon. | abuseAw... what a cute chapter! Can't wait till the next one:D |
| Alenor 2008-08-21 ch 6, | abuseheya, great chappie. i know this is a maddie and brian pairing at the moment, but i'm actually really hoping she ends up with adam, he seems like such a sweetheart! can't wait for more ~ Alenor |
| menace in training 2008-08-18 ch 5, | abuseI like this story a lot! Keep up the good work, I see you haven't updated in a bit, so hopefully there's one on its way sometime soon. Keep up the brilliant work! |
| Alenor 2008-07-28 ch 5, | abuseyay! progress has been made. can't wait for more ~ Alenor. |
| Boberick. 2008-07-26 ch 5, | abuseThat was sweet. |
| Boberick. 2008-07-26 ch 4, | abuseAdam. Yeah, that was interesting. So many mysteries...haha. |
| Boberick. 2008-07-26 ch 3, | abuseHaha, I loved that chapter. You could just feel the sexual tension in the biology room. Anyway, it got interesting. The first two chapters didn't entertain me that much but this one was funny. (Y) Good writing. |
| dreamgazer220 2008-07-26 ch 5, | abuseAww, that was cute. And you were right in not making it anything too special, and I'm glad Mikey and Devin weren't around. Haha, I like Devin's nicknames too. Nice chapter! UPDATE SOON!! |
| kuririncute222 2008-07-25 ch 4, | abuseomg ur story is so good! i cant wait till u update again! =] |
| Alenor 2008-07-11 ch 4, | abuseoh maddie is gonna get together with adam instead of brian, isn't she? this is intriguing. can't wait for more ~ Alenor |
| dreamgazer220 2008-07-10 ch 4, | abuseWow, that was a really long chapter! I don't think even I have written one 17 pages... it was good, though. And I liked Adam, he was fun. And I actually just really liked this chapter as a whole, so GOOD JOB SARAH! duh. ♥! |
| I Dream of Scotland 2008-07-10 ch 4, | abuseYay, new guy. I did enjoy this long chapter. It was great! :) Thanks for the new chapter and I look forward to the next one! |
| Alenor 2008-06-30 ch 3, | abusehaha! i love it! operation shortcake is awesome! :) brian would be stupid not to call her with their 'chemistry'. can't wait for more ~ ALenor. |