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wordsofjade 2008-06-27 ch 1,	abuseReally really good! I love the ending...it is SO you! lol:)
Erma Buckles 2008-06-22 ch 1,	abuseI feel like you are writing the same poem over and over with this same idea. Once again you use the phrase: "Crossed the line" I've seen it in three separate poems so far, and they all have the same idea. Maybe you should combine them into one, because it gets boring after a while, reading the same idea again and again.
Imperia 2008-06-19 ch 1,	abuseaw, i love this poem. i can relate in so many ways to it. i hope you and your friend worked things out. i didn't think the ending was weird, i thought it was sweet. great job ^^