|Reviews for Apikkaskuld|
| Alteng 6/21/08 . chapter 1
I tried to leave a review yesterday, but FP was having issues.
The first thought I had with this was about "Oh My Goddess" and the younger sister Skuld in that one. I know very little about that series and what it is based off of. So, I can't say much about where the origins of this story comes from.
The other impression I get of this piece is that this is an opening poem, but it does not seem to have much in the way of poetic structure. Poetry is not one of my strong points, so what do I know. All the same it does have the surrealism of a dream sequence. Of course, not seeing the latter chapters, I can't make a full judgement on this.