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| Erma Buckles 2008-06-22 ch 1,  | abuseOk, this is weird, but true. You have written this poem twice. Not exactly, but almost. Your poem Glass is so much like this! About the same things, even using some of the same phrases such as: Petty and insecure You make yourself better by putting others down It's different then then Glass, though, because Glass is about standing up for yourself to someone is is not real, and this is about disliking that person. I like Glass better, it's better written and it explores this idea of a person who is hurtful and fake better. |