The other three looked as if they’d disowned him right then and there. ha ha.. that made me laugh soo much.. wow, i really liked this... it had spunk, pazzaz and all sorts of fun stuff. thee ae a few typos in it, that you should look over and correct.. but other than that the awesomeness was astounding

I need to read more of this, and if you don't shit out more of this brilliant story you will be the reason for a handsome young man's unfortunate time with the reaper.

Jesus! Her Aunt is horrible, I would hate living with her. I hope she's alright.