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SarcasmIsPoetry 2009-10-02 . chapter 1
I really love cute, funny and at the same time tragic stories like this. :( This made me remember my friend who died at the age of 13.
LilieStar 2009-09-23 . chapter 1
WOW! This story is amazing, no wait, YOU are amazing. Rebekah, you have an amazing writing gift which makes me read your stories. keep writing!
ChocoResha 2009-09-02 . chapter 1
Aww, that was so sweet... A somehow sad-ish sweet, which not many other fics have. Very nicely written ^^ Lillian did seem like a complete angel.
Vicky A. 2009-08-23 . chapter 1
What a cute story. I feelt sad when I read about Lily, but her death mede the story more beautiful. Good luck in the future!
s-pecial-lee me 2009-08-22 . chapter 1
aww that is so frikin sweet
TiggerGurl 2009-08-05 . chapter 1
That was absolutely the Sweetest thing in the world!
windlessnight 2009-08-04 . chapter 1
aww is so sweet i like how you can twist the whole story and the way lily and vannessa met . thx for writing plus posting .^^
Im Just Mlssundaztood 2009-07-18 . chapter 1
I loved this oneshot. Just the though of proposing on her grave kinda seemed disrespectful in a way.

everything else seemed realistic.

Great job on this.

-You were never ever there
Phemonoe 2009-06-29 . chapter 1
that... was super sweet :) I love your oneshots!
xShadowMaskx 2009-06-03 . chapter 1
;_; Aw, that's so sweet. D: I loved it. Really moving. ^^
lee cross 2009-05-31 . chapter 1
Cool story. It's sad and happy. The last sentence ("Lily was blessing us") was also sad and happy. I mean, he asked her to marry him on her GRAVE! But I liked it.
animegirl214 2009-05-26 . chapter 1
aw. tht's so cute!! :]
this isn't like.. a true story is it?? or was it all ur imagination? cuz if it was.. ur brilliant. tht's all i have to say. :P
chocolate_and_bananas 2009-05-24 . chapter 1
that was so nice.

i would like a friend like Lily.

she seems so nice. an angel, really.

:)

thanks for sharing this work of yours, keep up the good work.
Narq 2009-05-23 . chapter 1
Wow. This is a totally breathtaking story. I loved the way it was quirky and funny at the start. The humor really launched me deep in the story. Then... near the end it got more sombre but it was just as good. I liked the sincere way you treated Lily's death. It is very appropriate.
Narq.
JamieBell 2009-05-22 . chapter 1
I really enjoyed this. Very sweet! I would've liked to see each little vignette expanded and developed a little more (would've made for an extremely poignant style), but very nice work! :)
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