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Reviews For: Friends For The Afternoon

Brazilian'Wonderer.
2008-07-13
ch 1,
abuseIt was a very nice short story. I mean, I could imagine these things and it is true; you do have friends for the afternoon. You don't see them again but you'll not miss them, or fall out. You'll just remember.
I loved the details you put into it. It was funny to think from a young kid's point of view. :)

Please do more of these types, they are just so awesome! xD
Twilight Starr
2008-07-01
ch 1,
abuseThe (dialogue) was pretty entertaining. I liked reading it. Nice work.

~Twilight Starr~
Spike loves Buffy
2008-06-23
ch 1,
abuseFabulous just left me wanting more.

Spike
Just Theo
2008-06-21
ch 1,
abusei really liked the story. Only one problem, with it. I do not want it to be a one shot!
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