Reviews for so long, farewell

paper bell 2008-06-27 ch 1,	abuse{ and sometimes i just want to go back to October when we walked together holding hands } like that line. Very nostalgic and sweet somehow. Nice work.
Tytherpol 2008-06-20 ch 1,	abusethis is really, really good because it feels real
The Hippie Nerd 2008-06-20 ch 1,	abuseVery emotional and heartfelt. I really enjoyed reading it. I'm no good with goodbyes either... I really like how the poem flows along and what it goes over. Some favourite lines: "the space between us on that air mattress / felt more like miles than a few / centimeters earlier" "when did my family start this / no eye contact business?" I can relate to that second one somewhat. Bravo, well done!