 red-flower 2008-06-24 . chapter 1i guess anyone can say this is easy to relate to, but really, it is. loved this. especially 'Instead, she eats strawberries / Solves puzzles and watches TV'. the normalcy is fantastic. |
 b 2008-06-21 . chapter 1as much as i love the cadence and consonants and subtlety of this poem... i'm pulling for a happy ending. ::keeps fingers crossed:: |
 melissaur 2008-06-21 . chapter 1Aww ... I can sort of relate to this. Loved it. |
 Lone Lily in the Garden 2008-06-20 . chapter 1I love this! This totally describes the past 9 years of my life lol!! Great poem keep it up ^_^! |
 kloun mannequin 2008-06-20 . chapter 1well, it's like a short story telling how is summer love, I guess, it's a good poem. |