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| MoonfireSpam23 2008-10-07 ch 1,   | I'm flattered... But this is pretty much my prologue... |
| Nabolion 2008-06-30 ch 2, | Great work! I really like this story. Keep up the good work and update soon. Feel free to read some of my works. |
| Siam Fuentes 2008-06-28 ch 2, | Wow, great job! Keep up the great work. You're getting better with describing things. Just keep in mind don't get out of narration, unless it's your character. Sometimes it can be a little funny, but it strays away from the point and confuses more than helps. You took some time and thought to write this. It looks like it paid off. The prologue was a little strange, but i was sleepy when i read it. It seems you have a good grasp on where you want to go with this. I'm glad i helped inspire you to write this. I can so imagine those girls fighting in the mud *lulling* ah... I'll be watching you. Keep up the great work. Please don't stop. Now go forth and write my child write! |
| hoho4 2008-06-24 ch 1, | This looks interesting I can't wait for more! |