I can definitely feel this with you! I'm a booklover myself- and I think you captured the longing and the sense of immersion in books really well. I'm not a poetry expert by any means- but I think maybe if you use punctuation in the section with quotations, you should also use capitalization in that part? For example, so that the H in hear is capitalized? If I'm wrong please forgive me haha just wanted to help! Good work!

I loved this poem , I could connect with the message, I can get lost in the mystique of a book as well! It was very paced out, and the rhytm was consistent. I enjoyed the fact that it was free verse, sometimes the rhyming of a poem can limit the word choice. Wonderful work!

Wow, i wasnt expection such a powerful poem. I really like it! Its so true. Books are so alluring and they are an escape from reality. Keep Writing!