|Reviews for hang you up to dry on broken streetlights|
| From The Stone Bridge 10/8/08 . chapter 1
God bless please, Mrs. Robinson heaven holds a place for those who pray - Hiding in the little hiding place..." "Mrs. Robinson"
Simon and Garfunkle.
| ilovetheopera 7/9/08 . chapter 1
your vocabulary is very large, good for you.
i love the first three lines. you really do use words very well.
though i kinda got past this emo dark angsty stage like three years ago i surprisingly still like stuff like this. good job.
| persephone in waiting 6/25/08 . chapter 1
This is very beautiful and extremely descriptive. The imagery and the colors that come to mind when I read this are dark and almost sensual. ... I don't know if that was what you were going for, but it's a lovely poem.
&& the title reminds me of the Cold War Kids song. :]
| paradigm se7en 6/23/08 . chapter 1
I like this. Seems...different, somehow, on each reading. Like a kaleidoscope, except fragile and brittle and sharp. Like the wordplay, too.
| Chidori Nadare 6/23/08 . chapter 1
Recycled words & old tricks? It doesn't feel like it or read like it.
I love the imagery on this one. Very twisted
| Scarlett Wynter 6/21/08 . chapter 1
recycled words & old tricks? hahaha. I don't care. I like it. :p I'd pick a favorite line, but I like em all.
| siphoned afterglow 6/21/08 . chapter 1
your imagery is mindblowing.
| McKinley Cooper 6/21/08 . chapter 1
Recycled words and old tricks put together very well. "Twisted tongues kissing eulogies" is my favorite line. I use parentheses often, so of course I love the last thought you added that you've got some new imagery in this one that is very effective-"silhouettes of your fake apologies" is great.